Please read the instruction and the prompt and rewrite the essay according to the feedback from the professor “Jason Ho”. READ THE FEEDBACK FROM PROFESSOR CAREFULLY AND REVISE IT PLEASE. “DRAFT-ESSAY” FILE.
PDF FILE “HUMA ESSAY” IS THE ESSAY FROM OTHER STUDENT WHO GOT AN “A” FOR THIS ESSAY. SO PLEASE READ AND USE WHAT IT TAKES FOR YOU TO REWRITE THE ESSAY THAT PROFESSOR IS LOOKING FOR.
I ALSO UPLOADED THE RUBRIC.
AND ON THE FINAL ESSAY COVER SHEET, IT SAYS “Response to feedback (25%): List all the revisions you made to respond to all the entries in the ‘items requiring major attention’ in the feedback table returned with your draft essay. Or give reasons below if you decided not to respond to any feedback. SO ANSWER THIS TOO! THANKS